03 December 2007 @ 11:06 am
This day has gone by so fast! It's almost lunch time already!  
I've been grasping at straws to come up with another way to let Mike get the girl. I already know it's far fetched. It depends upon so many things that are ... uncollaborated by canon. Nevertheless, with that teaser, I present to you:




"Bella? Bella Swa-Cullen?" He was walking toward her from the vegetable section and she turned toward the sound of his voice, smiling at first. Her grocery cart was half full. He was glad he’d run into her, though it seemed odd to see her, here of all places.

"Swan, Mike. Bella Swan. Geez, it hasn't been THAT long since you've seen me."

Mike Newton squinted at the girl he'd spent the last two years of high school falling all over himself for. She looked good. She'd put on some much-needed weight in the year since he'd seen her last. Since he'd seen her last - at her wedding. To Edward Cullen. Why did she say her name was still Swan?

"Right," he said uncomfortably, unwilling to contradict her. Maybe she'd kept her name after the wedding. What did he know? He tried to look at her left hand discreetly, and she made it easy for him, reaching up for a can of creamed corn. Her fingers were bare. "So, when did you get back into town?"

It was October, and he was sure he'd heard that Bella and Edward were both attending Dartmouth. She should be a Sophomore this year, but here she was, shopping for groceries like she'd got stuck in this God-forsaken town the same as him. It was Bella's turn to squint. "Just today. I was -" she paused and shook her head, putting the can of corn back on the shelf to turn toward him. She looked confused. "I was driving on an overgrown path - and I came out on that road that heads out of town to the East, so I came back into town and went home. Charlie was still at work, so I checked the fridge, which was empty, and then I came here. But -"

Mike watched her carefully as she spoke and then broke off abruptly. She looked thoroughly lost. "Bella, shouldn't you be at school?"

"We graduated, Mike. Or are you skipping, too?" she joked, suddenly herself again.

"No, I mean, you've been going to Dartmouth, haven't you? I heard you and Edward were living there now."

"Edward?"

Now Mike knew something was horribly wrong. Bella was looking at him with a pleasant expression, puzzled, but not upset. Not yet. He, however, was starting to feel like he'd entered the Twilight Zone. "Yes, Edward Cullen. Bella, a year ago last month you married him and moved away to go to school at Dartmouth."

Bella blinked at him, then turned away, picked up the creamed corn again, and put it into her shopping cart. She pushed the cart a few feet and he followed her, still watching, trying to decide what to do. "Bella, I think I should drive you to the hospital. If you've forgotten -" he broke off as she turned around, tears streaming down her face, and he thought for a minute that maybe she'd just been pretending to forget. Maybe Cullen had left her again and she was going to turn back into that zombie she'd been for half of their Senior year. "Bella?"

"I don't remember," she whispered, horrified. "I can't remember where I was before I was in the truck. I can't remember anything you're talking about. Married?"

Mike realized that in another two minutes, she was going to be hyperventilating right there in the middle of the grocery store. "Come on, I'll drive you to the hospital. We'll call Chief Swan on the way," he said, putting an arm around her. She turned her head into his shoulder, and thus didn't see every single person in the supermarket watching them walk out, leaving her half-full cart abandoned in the middle of the store.

They drove to the hospital, only ten minutes away, in utter silence except for a quick phone call to her dad. Bella was still sniffling, so Mike handled that. The Chief was astonished, to say the least, and quickly said he'd meet them at the hospital. When they arrived Mike spoke to the nurse for her and then sat with her, waiting. When Dr. Gerandy finally came into the little room, he raised an eyebrow at Mike. "Should I go?" he asked quickly, casting a glance at Bella. He didn't really want to, but he didn't want to be in the room if there was going to be some kind of physical examination, either. He liked her a lot, but they'd never been close enough for that.

"No, stay. I don't - I need someone here who knows what's going on," she stuttered, embarrassed. "That's okay, right?" she asked the doctor belatedly. He nodded.

"What's the last thing you remember, then, Mrs. Cullen?" he asked, eyes on her chart. Bella's eyes widened.

"Um. She doesn't remember the wedding," Mike interjected quickly, and Dr. Gerandy looked taken aback.

"Miss Swan, then," he amended. Bella blinked a few times and took a deep breath. She seemed to be stretching out her mind towards something. In her eyes was a great expanse of nothingness, and on the other side of it was...

"I remember Graduation. Jessica Stanley hugged me, even though she'd hardly talked to me all year." She said this with a frown, and Mike rolled his eyes. That was Jess for you. But she and Edward had been back together for months by Graduation. How was it possible that she remembered it and not him? He tried to stop his mind from considering it a gift from God, if she really didn't remember anything about Edward Cullen.

Dr. Gerandy nodded. "I'd like to examine your head, if you don't mind. This kind of memory loss can be caused by trauma to the head. Tell me if anything feels tender."

Mike watched as the man felt along Bella's scalp in a very professional manner. When he'd finished, Bella shook her head bemusedly. "My head doesn't hurt at all."

It was obvious that Dr. Gerandy was stumped. He was just pulling out a prescription pad, though what pills might fix something like this Mike had no idea, when Chief Swan showed up, not even bothering to knock at the door. "Bella?!" he asked worriedly.

"Hey Dad," she said, smiling sheepishly. "I don't think I fell down this time."

"Bells, I haven't heard from you for a month, and then you turn up back here and at the hospital? What's going on? And where the hell is Edward THIS time?!" he asked angrily, with a glance at Mike. Mike shrank back into the small plastic chair, wishing he'd mentioned to Bella's dad that she couldn't remember Edward.

When Mike or the doctor had questioned her on what she remembered, or mentioned Edward, she'd seemed confused. Now she just seemed angry. "I don't KNOW what's going on, and I don't know where this Edward is. I don't even know WHO Edward is. And if you don't stop shouting at me for it, I'm -" she stopped, mid-rant and blinked.

"Moving out?" Charlie suggested quietly. This was clearly a familiar phrase between them, used often in the months leading up to her wedding. Even Mike had heard the rumors that Bella was going to move in with the Cullens before the wedding. She'd fought with her dad so loudly that the whole neighborhood had heard. And word gets around, in Forks.

"That's what I was going to say, but I don't know why I was going to say it. I don't want to go to Jacksonville. Where would I go?" This admission was quiet, and thoughtful. She obviously didn't remember those fights.

"Aw, Bells," he said quietly. He opened his arms and Bella stood to hug him. Mike exchanged a glance with the doctor. The whole situation was just too weird. "Why don't you and Mike wait for me outside for a minute," he suggested, releasing her quickly. Bella nodded, and Mike followed her out the door, closing it behind him.

"So, I'm married?" she asked lightly, seating herself in one of the vacant plastic chairs, her eyes turned up to him pleadingly.

"I was there. Your dress was really old fashioned, and you looked really happy," he said, remembering. He'd rather tell her that he didn't know what she was talking about, no of COURSE she wasn't married. But he couldn't see lying to her. It wouldn't be right. Even if it might mean she was available to date whoever she liked. Even if it might mean he finally had a chance.

Bella shook her head, bringing her left had up before her face. "Then where's my ring?" she asked nobody in particular. "And who is my husband?"


Chapter 2
 
 
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Julie: misc- texas![info]julibeth on December 3rd, 2007 04:40 pm (UTC)
Simply wonderful and creative. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. :D
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 05:10 pm (UTC)
:) Thanks!
miss c: team werewolf[info]tiggz on December 3rd, 2007 05:50 pm (UTC)
iiiiiinteresting!! i'm guessing Edward is once again making choices for Bella and found a vampire that can erase memories and that's what he's done. to keep her "safe".
Daintress[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 06:02 pm (UTC)
Hush! You'll ruin it for everyone else! *snerk*

No, really, that's an excellent guess....
Nimoko: Morose[info]nimoko on December 3rd, 2007 07:10 pm (UTC)
Oooo.. with my new-found Mike love (thanks to you, of course) I was hooked before I even clicked the link to read.

This is fascinating! I have no idea what's going on or what happened and I love it!

I can't wait for the next chapter.
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 07:11 pm (UTC)
Yay! :) Mike love is sadly under rated. We have to stick together.

Also, your userpic is awesome and matches my mood theme. Lol!
Nimoko: Woman in Love[info]nimoko on December 3rd, 2007 07:57 pm (UTC)
Oh, it is all about the Mike love!

And thanks! I just adore Pride and Prejudice (and your mood theme absolutely rocks my socks).
macbeaner[info]macbeaner on December 3rd, 2007 07:46 pm (UTC)
Hmmmm. Suspenseful. it will be interesting to learn how she lost her memory and what happened to Edward
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 07:48 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I rarely start off with a mystery. :) But, you will have to wait. It's only five chapters, and all is revealed in the epilogue....
Tony: Cheating - Werewolf[info]thisistony on December 3rd, 2007 08:40 pm (UTC)
BUT WHAT ABOUT JACOB?

Come on, you can't expect anything else from me XD My comments have an *insert praise and win here* by default
Daintress: Jacob Fictional Boyfriend[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 08:51 pm (UTC)
You don't honestly think I'd post ANOTHER story with no Jake in it, do you? Oh, yes. There WILL be Jacob Black.
Tony: Twi - Space Heater[info]thisistony on December 3rd, 2007 08:54 pm (UTC)
For all I know there might be no Jacob until you get around to finishing the J story that's been on the backburner for want of an ending. :X

But YAY.

But I have no faith that he's going to end up happy -- not when you have B going for the kitten instead of the tiger cub
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 08:56 pm (UTC)
If I were asking for your faith in that, I'd be cruel indeed.
Kitten FTW!
Tony[info]thisistony on December 3rd, 2007 08:58 pm (UTC)
You are a cruel, cruel woman...
Tiger cub!
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 09:03 pm (UTC)
Re: You are a cruel, cruel woman...
NO! Kitten, I tell you. You and I might be women enough to handle a tiger cub, but I assure you Bella can barely deal with a kitten. Lol!
Tony: Cheating - Werewolf[info]thisistony on December 3rd, 2007 09:06 pm (UTC)
Re: You are a cruel, cruel woman...
In the case of J!tiger, he'd take care of her. ;3
Daintress: Jacob Fictional Boyfriend[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 09:14 pm (UTC)
Re: You are a cruel, cruel woman...
I'm considering a new premise for a story. (Speaking of J!)

What if he'd lost it entirely that night in the garage (Eclipse, when she tells him WEEKS, not years), and phased in that small space with her? How might things have played out, in that case? I think that'd be a good story. He came so close to losing it.
Tony: Twi - Space Heater[info]thisistony on December 3rd, 2007 09:22 pm (UTC)
Re: You are a cruel, cruel woman...
In canon, I think he didn't because Sir Author was trying to stress the point of J having the most control, being the real alpha, etc, etc, but so saying that he DID...

Well, all I can see is Bella adding this onto the list of reasons she should be changed now, plz, not later because after the entire James debacle, she she chomping at the bit to get changed and considering that by that point she hasn't realized that she's in love with him... Well, it just doesn't look good for J.
Daintress: Jacob Fictional Boyfriend[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 09:26 pm (UTC)
Re: You are a cruel, cruel woman...
I hadn't considered how it might affect her future plans. I was thinking more along the lines of what would happen between her and Jacob as a result....
Hogwarts Hag[info]hhhellcat on December 3rd, 2007 09:23 pm (UTC)
God I love your brain and the way it works! This is brilliant. A mystery for the holiday. *grin*

And you have stoked the fires for me to actually like Mike. What is this world coming to? *giggles*
Daintress[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 09:27 pm (UTC)
Cool holiday userpic. Much better than my cynical Christmas dog. Lol!

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Hogwarts Hag: santa sam[info]hhhellcat on December 3rd, 2007 09:41 pm (UTC)
But your cynical dog pretty much sums up my feelings toward the holiday so I love it. LOL

And mine is a manip of Eric Winter because I'm obsessed with him for some reason. It's all about the pretty. :) I made a bunch of Christmas manips last year. Here's another.
Daintress[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 09:55 pm (UTC)
Very pretty. :)
Ali: twl | choose your side[info]deadduck008 on December 3rd, 2007 10:31 pm (UTC)
Amnesia! Love that stuff!
Haha, no, this is really an interesting idea and I'm curious to see how it will pan out! CLIFFHANGER!
Oh Mike, maybe now he'll get his chance. Lovely :)
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 11:39 pm (UTC)
I warned you I was reaching. Lol! Thanks. Hopefully it will be explained well enough at the end to make it feasible....
Missa[info]xmisachan on December 3rd, 2007 10:51 pm (UTC)
Wha? O.O Okay, you have me hooked already. XD;; I can't wait to read more. ^__^

Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 11:36 pm (UTC)
*grins* Glad you're entertained so far.
RedDawn07[info]reddawn07 on December 3rd, 2007 11:29 pm (UTC)
Oh my! I'm hooked. I saw in the other comments Jacob will make an appearance - YAY!!! So intriguing - no ring, you say...no memory too...Edward, you really tried to make it a 'cleaner' break this time, didn't you?
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 3rd, 2007 11:38 pm (UTC)
Ah, the desire to give away the plot is strong. But I will use the force and resist. Lol!
RedDawn07[info]reddawn07 on December 4th, 2007 12:08 am (UTC)
Hahaha!! I almost spit out my drink when I read that! Stay strong with the force!!
Daintress: House[info]daintress on December 4th, 2007 12:13 am (UTC)
It's so great that you're amused by me, because I'm such a gimp. Lol!
RedDawn07[info]reddawn07 on December 4th, 2007 01:11 am (UTC)
*snort* Well you know, those of us that were actually alive to see the originals in the theatre have to stick together - no matter if we were too little to actually watch the movie.
Daintress: River[info]daintress on December 4th, 2007 02:34 am (UTC)
Amen, sister! All these upstarts that think it started with Episode I! HA! As if we'd have sat through that crap as children, without first having seen 4-6! No WAY babe. Jar Jar wouldn't have been on MY lunchbox!
[info]edwardscupcake on December 4th, 2007 12:57 am (UTC)
Oh my! Where's Edward? *runs off to kidnap him, before Bella gets there* Haha, I'm intrigued! Interesting how Bella remembers everything about us humans, but not about the vampires or werewolves. (She doesn't remember anything about the werewolves, right?)
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 4th, 2007 12:59 am (UTC)
We'll address the werewolf issue shortly. ;)

Thanks!
Jena[info]jena_elizabeth on December 4th, 2007 02:57 am (UTC)
Haha. I liked that. I probably shouldn't, but I do. :)
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 4th, 2007 02:58 am (UTC)
Yay! :) I wanted to get people hooked because the premise is SO hokey. Lol!
BeccaBeccaBecca: pic#68889713[info]replays on December 4th, 2007 05:33 am (UTC)
BAH. That was so damn good, but now I HAVE to know what's next or I'll die. >.>
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 4th, 2007 12:00 pm (UTC)
That WAS the idea. Lol! No, seriously, I'm usually not so wicked with the cliff hangers, but every once in a while, they just appear out of nowhere. I don't even necessarily intend them.....
Sam: wicked: new project[info]el_diablo4 on December 4th, 2007 04:20 pm (UTC)
Wonderful beginning! I'm so intrigued...

and you have Mike Newton in it, which automatically catches my eye.

I'll definitely be keeping a watch out for updates!
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 4th, 2007 04:23 pm (UTC)
:) Thank you. I actually JUST put the next chapter up! I haven't even had time to link them yet...
(Anonymous) on December 5th, 2007 09:15 pm (UTC)
i cant find chapter 2 though are you posting it right now
Daintress[info]daintress on December 5th, 2007 09:21 pm (UTC)
- [info] on December 4th, 2007 10:01 pm (UTC)
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 4th, 2007 10:19 pm (UTC)
:) Is that good or bad?
Jackie Lamagnifique: by crashintoyou_x elle is excited[info]tju_tju_tju_tju on December 10th, 2007 02:20 pm (UTC)
Ah! So intriguing. I'm lovin' this *runs to next chapter*
Daintress: Mike Newton[info]daintress on December 10th, 2007 02:25 pm (UTC)
Were you waiting until it was finished? Probably a good idea. I think the suspense drove everyone nuts on this one. Lol!
Jackie Lamagnifique: by eonism mohinder/bennet fall[info]tju_tju_tju_tju on December 10th, 2007 02:32 pm (UTC)
Hee, yeah, I was. Good thing, too, or I would've died from suspense. XD